The following tanka was written for Thursday Photo Prompt Torrent #writephoto over at Sue Vincent’s.
As water hits me
I feel invigorated
Torrential currents
Going where the falls take me
Riding the water downstream
© Susan Zutautas 2020
Waterfalls #Tanka
Posted bySusan ZutautasPosted inChallenges, Poem, TankaTags:#writephoto, love poem, Susan's Place, Tanka, Thursday Photo Prompt, Torrent, Waterfalls
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A Canadian girl, born in Montreal, mother of three grown boys that lives with her husband in Ontario. Published author and poet. Loves to write flash fiction. Author of New In Town and two children's books which can be found on Amazon. View more posts
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I’m late to the party. Sorry about that; I’m quite behind in my work. As always, love your work. Have a beautiful and restful weekend, Susan!
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Bill, no need to ever appologise. |Thank you for such a nice compliment. You have a wonderful weekend to and don’t overdo 🙂
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A waterfall is not quite a lazy river. But to travel by water is delightful.
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Yes it sure is!
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Hi Susan, good to see you here, I like the Tanka , it’s strong and positive 💜
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Thank you!
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💜💜💜
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How else can we ride the stream?
Nice tanka, Susan. Thank you for joining in this week.
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Thanks so much, Sue!
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