Meg and Ian Flash Fiction
Meg, in a daze, was reminiscing about the first time Ian said, “I love you,” She got butterflies, felt intoxicated, and for the first time in her life without a doubt knew he was the one.
Not being able to sleep Meg got up, put on coffee, and ran a hot bath for herself. In ten hours, her life was about to change. Passionate love filled her heart.
Getting dressed, Meg heard her father’s voice and then a light tap at the door. “Come on Hun, I need to get you to the church on time. Are you ready?”
© Susan Zutautas 2019
This was written for November 21st’s Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch. In 99 words (no more, no less), write a romance.
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It reminds me of the day before my marriage. How we are unable to sleep…anxious…happy… This story seems apt for the prompt.
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Thanks! Same here, unable to sleep 🙂
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Sounds like a classic romance.
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Thanks!
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Susan, I love how this flash both reminisces on what the romance genre calls the “cute meet” and drives forward with the HEA marriage. You write romance well and I still think about these two characters.
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Thanks, Charli for all you do and teaching me along the way. Happy Thanksgiving. ❤
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This is very romantic, Susan. A lovely story.
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Thanks so much!
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