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Bundle of Sticks

by Susan Zutautas on June 26, 2019
CCC#33

CCC#33

 

Bundles of sticks lay on the forest floor

Thinking to myself,

What a score!

Baskets I could make and

I would with no mistake

Carry them back to my cabin,

I put them in my wagon

Suddenly I stopped

and thought

Someone made these bundles

and then I heard a rumble

I put them back quick

thinking I was slick

I grabbed the wagons handle

This walk no longer a ramble

I ran as fast as I could

All turned out good

 

© Susan Zutautas 2019

 

This was written for Crimson’s Creative Challenge.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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From: Challenges, creative writing, Crimson's Creative Challenge, Poem
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10 Comments Post a comment
  1. Violet Lentz #

    Whew!! Close one! Loved the rhythm of the words.

    Liked by 1 person

    June 29, 2019
    Reply
  2. H.R.R. Gorman #

    Excellent rhythm – loved how singsong it was!

    Liked by 1 person

    June 26, 2019
    Reply
  3. crimsonprose #

    I’m glad it turned out good. You shouldn’t take the giants’ withies. Or were they the witches?

    Liked by 1 person

    June 26, 2019
    Reply
  4. robertawrites235681907 #

    I am glad it all turned out well, Susan.

    Liked by 1 person

    June 26, 2019
    Reply

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