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A Little Bird Changed The Day

by Susan Zutautas on May 2, 2019

Crimson's creative challenge #25

As the day got hotter and hotter

I sat staring off into the water

Dreaming of better days

Wishing the bad ones would go away

Worrying about so many things

Then I heard a little bird sing

My mood suddenly improved

I became quite amused

The little bird upon the rock

Made me smile, what a shock

 

© Susan Zutautas 2019

 

This poem was written for Crimson’s Creative Challenge.

 

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From: Challenges, creative writing, Crimson's Creative Challenge, fiction, Poem, Poetry
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  1. Jen Goldie #

    Nice write Susan 🙂 💜🌼

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  2. Sneha Ganesh #

    Lovely

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  3. Josie Two Shoes #

    It only takes one moment of recognizing the gifts around us to help us refocus. This little bird made all the difference! ♥️

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  4. robertawrites235681907 #

    I loved this poem, Susan. It really gave me a mood lift.

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    May 2, 2019
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  5. crimsonprose #

    Love that. Liked the rhyme in those last two lines. It acts like an exclamation mark.

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    May 2, 2019
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