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A Little Bird Changed The Day

Crimson's creative challenge #25

As the day got hotter and hotter

I sat staring off into the water

Dreaming of better days

Wishing the bad ones would go away

Worrying about so many things

Then I heard a little bird sing

My mood suddenly improved

I became quite amused

The little bird upon the rock

Made me smile, what a shock


Β© Susan Zutautas 2019


This poem was written for Crimson’s Creative Challenge.


23 Comments Post a comment
  1. Nice write Susan πŸ™‚ πŸ’œπŸŒΌ


    May 2, 2019
  2. Lovely

    Liked by 1 person

    May 2, 2019
  3. It only takes one moment of recognizing the gifts around us to help us refocus. This little bird made all the difference! β™₯️

    Liked by 1 person

    May 2, 2019
  4. I loved this poem, Susan. It really gave me a mood lift.

    Liked by 1 person

    May 2, 2019
  5. Love that. Liked the rhyme in those last two lines. It acts like an exclamation mark.


    May 2, 2019

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