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The Longest Days – Flash Fiction

This week’s flash fiction challenge over at Carrot Ranch is to write a short story or poem (in 99 words, no more, no less) using exhaustion as your prompt.


Meg never realized how fatiguing it would be being the main caregiver for Ian’s mother who’d fallen and broken her hip.

It had only been four days since she’d been released from hospital and Meg still had six to ten weeks of this to look forward to.

If there weren’t so many stairs in Sandy’s house it would be so much easier but at the same time, Meg knew she was helping someone and getting exercise.

On one trip Sandy said to Meg, “I’m so lucky to have you and so is Ian.”

That made all the exhaustion worthwhile.

© Susan Zutautas 2019

I wrote a second flash fiction this week that follows this one.
Catching a Nap.

12 Comments Post a comment
  1. Reality-based fiction 😊 Being appreciated makes all the difference. ♥️

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    April 28, 2019
  2. Very nice. Every situation has a good side to it too!

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    April 27, 2019
  3. Silver linings, always with us. 🙂

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    April 27, 2019
  4. Beautiful ☺️

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    April 27, 2019

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