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Place of Worship – Senryu

by Susan Zutautas on March 27, 2019

what do you see march 26

Stone cold deserted

Gone, once a place of worship

That was long ago

 

Safe sanctuary

Before … To many lost souls

Meeting together

 

One congregation

Finding, needing guidance

Appreciation

 

Unsubstantial ghosts

Spirits to some remain here

Incarcerated

 

© Susan Zutautas 2019

 

This was written for a challenge over at Willow Poetry called What do you See?

 

 

 

 

 

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16 Comments Post a comment
  1. Nathan #

    Powerful – love the movement and mood!

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    April 11, 2019
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  2. pvcann #

    The ghosts of cloister past!

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    April 2, 2019
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  3. CHINA ALEXANDRIA LIVING THE DREAM #

    Reblogged this on LIVING THE DREAM.

    Like

    March 28, 2019
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  4. CHINA ALEXANDRIA LIVING THE DREAM #

    IT IS ACTUALLY THE MONKS PLAYING THEIR DAILY ‘LIVE CHESS’ GAME. ONE STEP LEFT OR RIGHT IS ONE MOVE. THEY FIGHT AT THE START SUSAN AS TO WHO WILL PLAY BISHOP AND WHO WILL BE QUEEN, CHINA

    Liked by 1 person

    March 28, 2019
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